Exploring the building

I can’t think of a better title and I had a problem about the bullet but anyway, comment & criticism please but not about the bullet.

What’s with the blur?
gun’s too high up on his shoulder.
other than that it’s okay, but not thread worthy.

He will probably break his shoulder if the gun is held up that high, the recoil on those things is really bad.

forget about the shoulder, he’d break his collarbone. if he was really unlucky, the bone could jut out and maybe cut an artery in the process.

so yeah, don’t hold a gun like that.

He is aiming/shooting or exploring the building?

For something with “Exploring in the title” I’d imagine a wide shot of the character in the location he/she/it was exploring. This close up is just intense and doesn’t feel very explore-y.