Faith being prepped for surgery

Latest cyberpunk series issue!
First pose since talktalk became dicks and didn’t come check our fucking phone line to see if the nets were down.

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/prepop.jpg

Script:
Guard: Where are you taking this girl?
Dr. Wallowitz: Surgery, immediately,
Guard: What’s the op?
Dr. Wallowitz: Exploratory bowel surgery, authorised by Miss sinclaire herself.
Guard: Not on the list
Dr. Wallowitz: Just let me through
Guard: No.
Dr. Wallowitz: SHE’S THE PATIENT! I’m THE DOCTOR! LET ME THROUGH OR I’LL CUT YOUR GUTS OUT AGAIN!
Guard: Go fuck yours-Fzzt Unauthorized conduct
Robot: Let. him. Pass, i have authority
Guard: SIR YES SIR!
Unknown Doctor(left):COUGH COUGH
Faith:NNGH!
Dr. Wallowitz: Don’t struggle my fair girl, your time is not yet
Static fills tape as the gurney wheels off and the wheels squeak

The room looks too empty but yet so crowded with people.

I think it’s rather fitting considering that only female punks are operated on, (Cuz their’s so few they seize the day)

-Posing is stiff and ugly.
-Whole scene is way too cluttered in the front, way too empty in the back.
-Those doctor models are ugly as fuck and don’t fully fit with the scene.
-40’s era doctors, 50’s style robot, and modern looking hospital =/= cyberpunk
-The scanlines are really harsh on the eyes.
-The REC icon and the red dot are both way too huge. Especially the dot.
-What the hell is with the blood on the back wall, isn’t this the hallway to the surgery room?
-The whole scene has no atmosphere. It doesn’t have a good color pallet to make it seem scary, cyberpunk, or whatever the hell you were going for.

-Try posing the bioshock models
-What?
-What??
-Cyberpunk doesn’t neccisate it’s chronologically accurate
-Show me how to do them better
-Ditto
-It’s not the best hospital in the world. much the oppisite,-
-ditto with scanlines

Usual deathbucket…

Give me the original and I’ll show you how to do them better.

once again, why wallowitz? just a random name?

Heard it in a cop movie once

Those are some nasty “doctors”

That is just one fucking huge,wrong placed rec. icon (Should be to right or down right)

And pretty much what Vman said.
[sp](I’m getting a feeling this guy is DB)[/sp]

hey… the bioshock models arent that hard to pose, besides the docter, I make ever one very flexible

nice pic by the way, rec symbol is a bit big though

he is

The doctor is very heavy

You all have to just PICK
PICK
PICK
PICK.

It’s not nitpicking if the errors are blatantly obvious.

How long did it take for you to figure that out? :downs:

People are nitpicking because they want your image to be perfect.

Ahem Yeah i agree.

I really dont see anything I like about it. The bioshock models look alright I guess, but you need to improve on the posing and editing dramatically.

Why the fuck do people demand perfect images, people don’t pose for fun aside those idiots who spooge over posing a skin of their spotty faced existence in gmod

What are you talking about? If it wasnt fun, why would anyone do it in the first place?