First Zombie Pose

My first zombie pose ever made.

Please give me constructive criticism to maybe improve.

Can’t really tell whats going on man. a little less blure and color mod would help though.

Same here. Hard to make any criticism when you have no idea what’s going on. Some model on the floor is all I can make out.
And link directly to the picture. Not Image Shack. Edit your post and put this link