https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33592701/HL2 Beta Pic FP.jpg
I would of maybe tried to add some variation to their positions, it almost looks like you duplicated the hazmat three ways.
Yeah, I see that now though I honest to goodness posed em’ all by hand with the physgun.
Isolation blending around the 'mats and fence is really really strong, and fire could have been slightly more transparent.
also should’ve added more layers of fire, smoke and embers in front and behind the burning corpses
The fire is really flat, pretty much what Ninja said (Is the fire trying to spell something?). The rain itself could use a little more depth as well. Some variation in the sky rather than that flat color could look nice, though that’s an opinion.