Freefall Comic Teaser

Yup. I’ve gone and done it now.

http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/7414/deropax0001edited.jpg

C&C. I did what I could with this. If any of you have questions about the comic, feel free to ask here.

Angle is nice, but people on the ground dont look deadish, it looks like you just throwed ragdolls around and the muzzleflash needs to be blurred with the background(and less white and smokish).

Posing on the dude with the hat is quite nice tho.

I like the tagline.

Speaking of that… whats a snafu? :expressionless:

If you must know…

Johnny bump-up.