Garry's Mod Addon Review

Hey can you guys review this video for me? I would like you to tell me what I can do to do better in this video. Thanks and enjoy. Btw, i’m not here to advertise, I want your opinion on my work as you being my audience.

To be honest, cringeworthy and way too long for a single extremely simple gun.

Who are you targeting your videos at?
People who cannot read clearly?

It’s funny, after I posted this I was thinking. Oh, it’s probably stupid to repeat what you say in the title in the thumbnail. The title is supposed to be “The Title” and the thumbnail should be a preview of the video corresponding to the title. I understand what you mean.

I thought it was pretty good.
Jokes were funny, and i like the editing style.