The key to depth-of-field is making it focus on… something.
His head is very close to the scope.
Yep, enjoy the smack in the eye socket as the rifle recoils. Do I also see the barrel between his fingers? Awesome, what a great place to get burned.
The graphic of the gun is not the best but the gun is nice
No, you don’t see. He’s holding the wood area on the rifle.
His thumb is clipping with the butt and is in a pretty strange posture.
He also needs a chiropractician, he might have slight back aches.
What Rossmum said. In my opinion the legs could be a little more bent too.
You haven’t seen the TF2 sniper rifle before?
Is it between his middle and ring fingers as it appears to be? Because that is a really, really awkward way to support 8lbs+ which is going to come back and kick you square in the shoulder.