German getting shot

constructive criticism please

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/181/dodcolmar0003.th.jpg

Xxxxtreme BLOOM!

Tone down the bloom, and the blood looks very flat.
Posing looks kinda stiff on the left arm and the pic looks kinda empty.

Also its [IMG] [ /IMG] .

Much bloom?
I don’t think this have essential bloom, but it needs some work :stuck_out_tongue:
Death posing needs some work, the camera angle need to be better.
And, I suggest you adding some enemies :slight_smile:

Camera angle is really quite dull.

Give him an “AARUUGGGGHH!” expression and shit’s gold.

Unluckily those models are not faceposable.

Oh yeah, I forgot. I’m sure there’s different kinds on garrysmod.org.

1.add a blood thingy that pops out blood,
2.make invisible
3.nocollide into german
4.turn on
5.???
6.Profit!!!

quite bland u need to add some backround atmosphere but otherwise not bad

hmmm ur right i prob should have done a little better job of my blood work

[editline]05:48PM[/editline]

lol thank you it was my first edited picture on gimp