GMOD Trailer - The Illusive Onlooker

The first trailer I’ve ever made using Garry’s Mod.

Please tell me what you think in the comments section :smiley:

Here

Thanks :stuck_out_tongue: What did you think?

Text was a bit hard to read because it faded so quick, the other stuff is “okay” not to exciting not bad.

Would of been better lip-syncing and the clip goes way to fast. It doesn’t feel very mysterious like the G-man.

yeah if you just took it a little bit slower and maybe add some lip syncing (as d_cover said) I think you would of had something pretty good here. Also maybe just adding some other things to explain the story I guess.

Thanks for the advice :smiley:

That wasn’t really bad and trashy. You have to keep up making videos and some time you will get a very high level of machinimamaking.