Alright this is my second “upload” on facepunch and my first comic, let us see if i did it correctly
http://filesmelt.com/dl/Halo_parody.jpg
does it work?
Sincerely, it’s confusing.
And also, does it has anything to do with hl2 apart from props/ragdolls, whatever.
But I think you have a decent posing there.
Also, those ropes look really weird…
okay, thanks that’s what i was looking for, but what ropes?
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can anyone else exhort me?
No one is going to give me any advice? dang…sorry for wasting everyone’s time
Err, the '“laser”.
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At least it looks like those gmod ropes, whatever.
Make it a bit larger? :S
Well thank you at least for commenting
Text is too small, it strains my eyes to read it.
doesn’t make any sense
well, i assume you have all played halo 2?
Not everyone has (Me, for example), but I know the ending.
I played Halo 2, and I just read this comic, and I thought it was absolute shit. You could not make it any worse, this is the epitome of every concept involving the world ‘shit’. Except sex poses, but that’s a different ring of hell.
Seriously, if I were you, I would look at other people’s comics and make sure that I don’t post until my quality meets theirs. Yours lacks humor, depth, proper posing, proper layout, EVERYTHING that you need to make a good comic.
Improve kthx.
follow the above’s advice but look into my literary epics
Create an unique comic based on anything other than your own imagination.
Okay, thanks everyone, i don’t believe you need to swear about it but whatever