I’d really appreciate it if you could C&C this picture!
I really like it, but here’s the constructive criticism I can offer: I think you could’ve centered the character in the picture, as it is he’s a little to the left (but no big deal), and I think maybe one or two bystanders staring could make the picture a little more lively.
It’s great that you pay attention to detail. You can never have too many props, only too cluttered. Finger posing is good, though he has quite an awkward pose. Though, maybe that’s what you were going for.
The picture as a whole is a bit boring, not much going on which leaves us with little reason to look at the picture for more then 10 seconds. A little more action in your scene could really help keep the image interesting.
Yeah it’s what I was going for :d