"He's done." Man gets shot in back.

Hi there!

So, it’s been a while since I posed, so pardon any mistakes. everything, but the muzzle flash done by me.
I made 2 versions, one without filmgrain and one with.

Without:

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/Imhappy.jpg

With:

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/Imhappy2.jpg

Constructive criticism only please :smile:

My thoughts are the gunshot looks a bit flimsy, but it’s the best I could do with my skills (for the moment at least).

Legs look a bit stiff on both people.

It needs a much more exciting camera angle.

I often drink my coffee dangerously close to edges!

Ok, Thank you everyone, I shall think of this next time I pose :smile: