Hostage Situation + Bonus

Hostage situation.

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1485/hostage.jpg

Not really any editing here. I just made the smoke, the scar, and touched up on the blood a little.

Bonus

A survivor, taking a rest from the action - or so he thinks.

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/1931/thecemanisawesome.jpg

No editing here. Just a quicky

C&C welcome.

turn up AA.

That guys legs are freaking me out.

smoke looks bad

Dude in the background of Bonus should have his hand up against the window. Are his legs up on a foot stool or something?

The smoke looks more like a ribbon than smoke. It is too long and straight.

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/7647/cigarette20smoke.jpg

Even though in the sample picture above her arm would have just moved the smoke is whispy and nowhere near as long of a trail.

The images are not too bad though the posing is all right. The first image is better in the second shot the survivor looks a bit blank.