I hate being in the dark! (with bonus)

http://filesmelt.com/dl/hate2.jpg

bonus

http://filesmelt.com/dl/rebels.jpg

bad faceposing.

Francis’s faceposing is much too exaggerated.

The faceposing on him is GOOD, but it’s too much, you have to tone it down a 'lil.

any comment on the editing?

Too much contrast. Way too much.

Posing is really good like always, but the faceposing like they said. Also the camera angle looks kind of fisheyed. As for the editing, it looks okay to me.