I know the drawing contest is over, but might as well... Any type of criticism is appreciated

Rust general
#1

Here it is. I’m not threading this to get a key, i know the contest is over. I spent all morning drawing this. Any criticism is appreciated.


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#2

Post as an image in the original post. 90% of the internet is too lazy to click a link unless it has boobs on the other end.