"I Own This Town"

version 2 of my 80’s vice pic a while back.

http://filesmelt.com/dl/exodus1.jpg

C&C

The posing on the right leg as well as the right arm looks unnatural, the fake light gleam/sideways racing stripes on the door, and the fake writing looks ridiculously fake. Also, in between his eyes but above the nose looks weird to me. It looks like it’s overlapping the glasses. Other than that it’s good.

Nice lighting, man.

I can tell from that statement that he didn’t take high-school economics.