IAN PAISLEYS ADVENTURES 1: A horribly made comic, "5/5" - IGN

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It was a normal day in CS_office. Our hero Ian Paisley was quietly reading a newspaper with the radio in the background.
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The radio flickers on and off, and switches frequency to a different channel.
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An unkown person places his hand on our heros shoulder, he turns around. There is suddenly a chill in the room and it is eerily quiet. Ian puts his hand under his desk and reaches for his highly customised Desert Eagle.
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Our hero runs to the next room, just escaping the unknown individual.
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Ian and his team has set up a trap, Stanley presses the button and springs the trap. The unknown figure now known as Dr Hax runs into the barrels followed by an explosion.
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Our hero and his bitches have won the day.
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OR HAVE THEY?!1/?

Dr Hax is totally not overused.

not bad man

Some of the writing was okay.

thank you guys i am plotting the making of the next episode in our heros adventures

Or and im just spitballing here Dont