''I'm coming for you son of a bitch!'' Mobster assassinating someone.

Edit and pose by me. C&C please.

Music

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/rp_richlandnight0005.jpg

smoke is way too opaque
lightning needs more dof
the dude’s perspiration or whatever that is is terrible, refrain from doing those type of things if you haven’t learnt to perfect it yet.

good but could be better.
is that cum on his face?

the sweat coming from the guys head looks bad

this.

and the guy’s right hand has broken fingers :frowning:

To be honest all your pictures look like your trying to put in as many effects as you can, tone them down a bit.

The sweat looks like semen.
Smoke doesn’t match the lighting at all.
Horrible jpeg compression on the skybox.