Infected House Cleaning Aftermath

Well, here’s my first screenshot I worked on this for about two hours and decided to upload it here to see what criticism I got. Oh, and it was all made completely in-game, I don’t have access to Photoshop nor Adobe After Effects. If anyone could reccomend me some good editing programs it would be much appreciated.

Um, well… I’ll be blunt, it’s not very good. Posing is strange, camera angle leaves a lot of space unfilled, there’s no one focus point, lighting is very harsh in some places for an evening map.

Basically, you’re new, and not much else is expected from new guys. Instead of trying to do one big scene that’s really artsy right off the bat, try doing a bunch of miniature vignettes with for practice with poses, lighting, angles, and whatnot.

tl;dr version: practice makes perfect. Keep on practicing.

Thanks for the feedback, I’ll be sure to work on it.

Gimp, basically a free photoshop. Somewhat shittier but still good, it’s what I use.

try different camera angles and make the poses look natural. looks ok for a first screenshot though.

I thought you burned the corpses instead of shooting them?