Infinite finality

Garry's Mod general
#1

https://pre00.deviantart.net/b275/th/pre/i/2017/259/1/b/epistle_3_by_apansenok-dblaont.png

I know this is a bit of an old one, and, IIRC, it already gained some traction and reached 4chan and other
corners of the internet. I originally posted it on the HL2 subreddit the night after Laidlaw leaked you-know-what.
I decided to repost it here because I wanted to get feedback from someone more qualified / experienced.
Kinda learned gmod stuff on my own, so, I’;m not really sure about anything, even though I’ve
been doing it for years now.

So, uh, yeah. Criticism is welcome.

#2

Good colors, especially the reflection in the floor and the HEV suit. I think the body on the right is too elevated in between the legs. Alyx’s right elbow seems elevated too high. I would also shift Freeman about 1 cm to the left because his crowbar intersects with gman’s suitcase. Other than that, it’s a pretty neat picture.

#3

Everything about this is pretty great, the reflections, colors and lighting are spot on. I agree with Crazy Knife about the body and composition.

#4

everytime I see G-man poses ppl make him to touch his tie, it looks a bit silly already, simply standing and looking at Alyx would be better, he came for her not Gordon.

#5

I feel it more effectively conveys his character with a simple gesture. It looks like Gordon walked in on him and he’s turning his attention because of it. The tie ties it together, I believe.