Is this a good pose for someones who new to this?

So I recently decided to play Gmod again after 2 years and I’ve been posing and I wan’t to see if people can tell me what I can improve etc.

http://i.imgur.com/EBeLxdh.jpg

Is this good enough?

Be a bit more precise on the finger positions. Guy on the right could do with a more ‘force’ on his grip, it looks like he just can’t be bothered holding the gun.

Alright thanks for the tip.

well you’ve already got some lighting techniques down which is pretty neat

they look pretty tired. Try making them look more rigid or firm standing.

Where’d you get the models?

Looks like he used them from this pack

Models