John # 6

(Sorry about making this one short and confusing. I was having a hard time deciding what would happen to John after the shop incident. So I just settled with this basic idea. But I promise i’ll make the next one worthwhile.)

In the middle of a small island, where the combine take their rule, enter John, a 28 year old bar owner who is
a hapless, and down-on-his-luck man who along with his friend Joe, begin a journey to retake their island and become kings.

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He looks very shocked to find himself in a prision.

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Whoops spelt prison wrong.

The characters in this series could use a bit of development and more personality, but I like the story and where it’s going.

Oh trust me they are going to develop, it’s just that I have yet to introduce them all.