Here is my first ever video.
My second one here, I get more in to it.
I can appreciate someone trying to make a hobby out of their hobby, and I understand the need to network when you’re just getting started. Fair warning tho, advertising your videos/YT channel here is mostly frowned upon.
One tip I’d like to offer for a better audience is to turn your voice up above the general ambiance of the game, and try to force a little bit more excitement than you actually feel. Find that balance of sounding fun without it sounding forced, because currently you sound a tad bored or unmotivated and that will rub off the wrong way on someone looking for entertainment. Good luck and keep at it if you’re serious.