not a half bad tear edit actually
however, two thirds of the picture is… well, nothing. practice your camera angles, don’t include stuff that’s not worth even looking at
Well, you need to work some more the camera angles, i see a lot of “nothing” on that tunnel.
I would say, lack of effort.
I would’ve put some guys closer to the corner.
the lighting in the tunnel and that tear edit is surprisingly impressive
you really need to improve your overall composition, this wouldve looked amazing honestly
and perhaps edit/experiment w ingame lighting a bit more to create a sort of subtle rimlight on those soldiers
it would really look better when you distinguish their silhouettes through rimlight imo
you still need a whole lot more practice w angles tho