Lag (Another comic made by ATP Agent)

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/Comic21.png

C&C plz

And after i went through the comic myself before uploading, I knew it was not funny at all but decided to upload anyway. So I don’t mind if you say it’s not funny.

  • use anti-aliasing before taking screen shots
  • try to avoid using gm_construct unless the plot REQUIRES it, which is usually doesn’t
  • I noticed a complete lack of facial posing
  • Rag doll posing is awful, spend at least a couple minutes per screen shot setting up each ragdoll, contort all the joints to make the rag dolls look ANIMATED and HUMAN
  • Honestly most comics CAN’T be funny unless they are pre-thought out for a little while. think about your dialogue in advanced and maybe even write it down so you can critique it better.