Lambda Corporation Doing Battle with Russian Forces (Freefall Teaser)

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#1

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There are three different edits to this picture. Regardless of C&C, I’d like to see what you guys think is the best one:

Edit 1 (blue filter):

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Edit 2 (higher contrast version of 1):

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Edit 3 (afternoon/orange filter):

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C&C. I used a lot of burning all over this one. Let me know if you guys like it.

#2

Posing is okay. Muzzleflash is bad, too blurry.

#3

Ah did whut ah cud…

I lack the skill to do much with muzzleflashes.

#4

Look up Chesty’s muzzleflash.

Talking Gullah on the internet makes you look like a bigger fool.

#5

It was a reference to the demoman in TF2. He has a voiceover where he drunkenly points out he did what he could.

I did use his tutorial with a completely different picture, but part of it wasn’t clear enough to me and I ended up getting an even worse looking muzzleflash.

#6

the posing needs work

#7

Which part? If you’re referring to the AUG trooper, I don’t think there is nothing wrong with him. It’s the angle.