Last Hope pt 1 ( Remade )

I remade it into something hopefully better…

old (click at your own risk) :


just noticed a bubble was cut off in the first panel along with a text not being fully bubbled.

Oh god, I LOL’d at the “NO YOU” part.

Okay, Also people post damn it! I see you reading it, yes you! POST!

Still pretty bad, honestly. The dialogue is terrible, the font looks horrid, and the editing is pretty low-quality. Story is pretty standard, still.

The speech is out of the speech bubble, the posing is not that great, and there are several spelling and grammatical errors. I just skimmed through it, so I wouldn’t know about the story.

Ok… It suc- know what… Im just going to say it was 10 times better then the first one.