Last Hope - Pt 1

Garry's Mod general
#1

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/Last_Hope_-_Part_1JPG.jpg

C/C

They will be longer I promise, I only had less then an hour to get it done.

#2

Dumb and generic. Shit dialog. 2/10

#3

I have to say… That was pretty terrible. Theunmen pretty much got it right on the target.

#4

Hello generic comic in RP_downtown that has to do with zombies/aliens/monsters number 999774

#5

Umm… I’m confused. What happened? Put little more effort in this comic and create a background story.

#6

A guh ak!!!

#7

I sort of agree with the others. But it’s much better than most of the crap that its put out here of type. Even then, where’s the story? There is a sign that you’ll reveal more of it in parts, but a simple structured back story would be nice so its easier to follow.