My dod comic

first comic,took me 30minutes.please comment

COMIC IS FROM LEFT TO RIGHT

Comic

When i read the text it looks very weird, its blurry and makes me have to concentrate on it too much. I also noticed that your panels are not aligned properly (makes you look sloppy in your work) on panel 4 you should pose each soldier differently, they’re not robots. Give them personality. Other wise keep up the good work :wink:

lol thx!

I see a apple tree here. I pick drama, action, love, comedy… Yes this comic got it all.