My First Gmod Machinima (Criticism Appreciated)

Posted this in the Movies and Screenshots forum until I noticed this lol.

Here ya go!:

Just got Gmod 2 days ago so I’m still learning, cut me just a little bit of slack here.

EDIT: Oh dear, I 've made quite a mess. Didn’t know my thread would get moved. Won’t happen again!

Good posing, counting that you just got GMod 2 days ago. I didn’t understand what was happening, the ending was funny though.

I thought it was pretty good. I liked how kliner part of it. Just bump up the AA and make sure there is no health hud on screen if you do make another video

Remove the HUD, put more effort overall into it, then it will be to my liking.