My first Machinima ** GNOME**

This is my first try at this, i think i am going to add more to the end so less is to the imagination. please let me know what you think.

It’s too slowly paced and the framerate and film effects make it unpleasant to watch. The music is also a little stress-inducing.

The framerate is slow and detracts from the film, unless you meant it to be so. Otherwise, a good movie. Quite a creepy flick.

Your art direction was cool, however work on that framerate, and also maybe do a bit more set design. The title at the beginning was rather meh as well.

This has potential