My First Scenebuild! =D

Garry's Mod general
#1

Well, this is my first scenebuild, I was inspired by everyone else’s scenebuild’s so I thought I’d give it a try!

http://filesmelt.com/Imagehosting/pics/41327ebfb96f891a255fdd45e071a177.jpg

http://filesmelt.com/Imagehosting/pics/0131f2fddae9dcb8f68a2016de9fe838.jpg

http://filesmelt.com/Imagehosting/pics/e9416c80338ebc7593d8d99a28c11320.jpg

C&C please, and if you feel, Edits are Welcome!
Enjoy! =D
Yes, I know the Girl is Floating and you can only see one of they guy’s knee’s thats a statue error.

#2

Pretty good, but needs some editing STAT.

#3

http://filesmelt.com/Imagehosting/pics/9457cdddc4345b2ad3c28f2623428abb.jpg

There!

#4

I lol’d

#5

she’s floating 0_0

#6

Not bad. So much grey is so bland though, and it’s really easy to do a ruins scene.