Any criticism or where I can improve?
They looks great for your first poses.
If you want to improve, i’ll say to boost your graphic to the max and make your poses less darker.
See you in 2 months when you make better shit then I can ever do!
You got potential if this is your first
You’ve got a future here man, keep improving and you’ll go far.
Good stuff for first two poses, I’d recommend using SuperDOF though.