Nanosuit Shoots Off-Screen Militia

I think Chesty posed this?

C&C please

Posing is good. Effects are nice too. But the camra angle makes me feel sick. I’m serious.

I like the angle, effects are nice. Posing is pretty good. Not bad edit.

I don’t like the 'flash.

Smoke looks okay, but this kind of cigarette smoke doesn’t fit with guns.

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And oh, posing looks great on Chesty’s part.

You should’ve edited in some sort of crumple around the car, because jumping onto/running on top of a car with a nanosuit ought to create alot of force on the hood.
Otherwise you did well, there really wasn’t much stuff you could do lighting-wise with the pic because it was almost perfect originally.