Nick's Paking

Oh shit! Its The cops!

http://filesmelt.com/dl/Nick!1.jpg

It kinda lacks focus, but other than that it’s pretty decent.

Editing’s good, but Nick’s posing on his back is a bit strange.

The door in the background looks much more clear than everything else, which is making it look unrealistic etc.

smoke is pretty excessive

he’s paking?

packing thats what i meant

S’alright.

The face posing on Nick could be better.

Smoke is affected by light - it isn’t a 100% bright white entity.