Obscurity Chapter Two - Deadly Odds

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#1

Here is the second chapter of the Obscurity series. This chapter focuses on Dans relationship with Rachel, as well as Dan finding out something else terrible happend on december the 31st.

Part 1

Part 2

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMM1ODzBAoM&feature=channel

If you want to watch chapter 1, you can find it here http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=822976

For more info on the series visit www.cjworkshop.co.uk

Please let me know what you think of it and say if you would or wouldnt watch the next chapter. As it takes a long time to make each chapter i dont want to be focusing so much time on a project that people are not enjoying. Thanks.

#2

just totally brilliant, but some the ref’s voice at the race was pretty dire, he should be like “AND THE WINNER IS HARRY!!” not say it in such a dull tone, and finally someone used the Sobel effects

the story is not bad at all, there was a few parts where the greenscreen was bad like when the thief was running into the elevator, one thing confused me though, how did the driver die if he wasn’t caught in the explosion?

Unique style.

#3

As the car toppled a few times i thought i would get away with it :stuck_out_tongue: but good point none the less. Im glad you like it overall though :slight_smile:

#4

This still has the most original art direction I’ve seen in a machinima so far.

It’s so incredible that you can forget that the flow is a bit too slow!

#5

Thanks for subcribing on youtube Max of s2d. Ive done the same. At some points i feel its necessary to have the slow paced parts but ill try and pace it out a bit better in chapter 3.

#6

Excruciatingly gritty and darkly lit. Otherwise artistic.