Ocean Horrors - My First Gmod Video!

I am welcome for criticism! Just remember this is my first!

Pacing is a little slow, but otherwise very very good for a first.

It seemed really odd that the stairs just broke and his suicide jump was too sudden. More hesitation before the decision would have been more dramatic. I also suggest choosing a location that isn’t so open and well lit; currently it detracts from the atmosphere of horror and suspense.

Agree^. I tried making a map for my first-person video, and I was trying to capture the lighting really well. The First-person part, not so much, more of the suspense. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8O1bN7gTqHc