"oh...shit!...strider!!!"

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strider beam is blue not purple. but good picture overall.

That Ammo box kinda ruins it?

editing is over-the-top, and the box screws with the composition. posing isn’t too shabby, although thanks to the immense bloom it took me several seconds to realise the guy up back was actually vaulting a section of collapsed fence.

The box adds more HL2 atmosphere seriously. Boxes everywhere.

Nice posing and prop-placement. Go easy on the contrast though, especially when you have really big, bright effects.

The crate somewhat killed the entire picture. Maybe if there wasn’t that much focus on it.

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Why are those two just standing out in the open? It kills the feeling of desperation and terror you created with those three there hauling ass like no tomorrow. I’ll excuse the guy to the left with the RPG since he’s about to open fire to kill it, but those two over to the right completely kill the mood for me.

Also that dialogue is terrible. A simple “SHIIIIIIIIT” or “STRIIIIIIIDERRRRRRR” would of worked much much better.

Probably one of the best scenebuilds I’ve seen.

Nice picture, great posing. But as mentioned, the editing is a bit much.