old story, new gmod-reffed graphics

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31531457/paradigmshift2.pdf

It’s pretty cool. the only issue I have right now are the speech bubbles. they get in the way of some of the shots. Other than that, I can’t say anything bad.

Very, very good. Amazing story. The posing and lighting could have had some work, and the layout could use some improvement, as well, but it’s truly impressive. It must have cost you a lot of work.