On patrol (improved a bit )

ok its the same as my old one but i improved it a tiny bit
http://www.cubeupload.com/files/d5f000onpatrollimproved.jpg
please give your thoughts on it. and please no flameing.

can’t see past the gray, bro

turn up your brightness i can see it fine.

what i mean is that the smoke or fog or whatever it’s supposed to be is completely overdone

Is patroll like a new kind of rickroll?

ugh ill fix the fog once more.

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ok i fixed it a bit i hope if not oh well im just useing all i have learned so far.

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ok i fixed it a bit i hope if not oh well im just useing all i have learned so far.

The poseing is kinda wierd on those guys walking

Still too much smoke(?)