Yeah the bullet holes kinda stand out too much and there’s too many of them.
The choppers look too close to me, as do the jets (which are too low too).
The smoke is a little too rounded and perfect.
The fire is barely giving off any light (you need to have a very white glow closest to the fire, rather than just an orange haze).
Apart from those harsh criticisms though, this is a very good picture indeed.
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Wasn’t “Irene” the go-code for the raid that started the Battle of Mogadishu?
The atmosphere looked fine until I scrolled down to see the fire. It really kills the picture… It’s way too dark and doesn’t seem to match the general color scheme of the rest of the picture.
I had a think about the fire, since FP is made up mostly of brainless twats, the ones who don’t give shits about atmosphere could look at the fire at least. Wanted to practice it too though.
The atmosphere is cool but in my opinion I think its too opaque(Dunno if its wrote that way).
Also Vman is right about the fire, the color it has right now makes it look like magma.
Nice posing there too, altho I think the heli on the right is too close to the panel.
Ohh and nice angle.
amaizing!
Some things that are incorrect (TOTAL FAN OF BHD)
-There were no planes in the movie, just choppers.
-The cars are waaay to new-looking.
-it’s missing soldiers in the choppers.
Everything else is great!