"Our basic instincts took over reason." -Pvt. Paxton Nally

-at least for the first 20 seconds-

Original background by Fussy, used it with permission : http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1047242-quot-200-years-pass-and-we-are-back-where-we-started.-quot-Augast-Soldiers-Force-Marshal-Law

Not the best at writing, but hey, I tried.

http://uppix.net/1/1/9/eccb57ae954ee61748f3bc5b36c02.jpg

tl;dr => barney calhoun guys vs Viktor’s guys and some zombies called “wanderers” in the middle.

I really like the lighting.

The writing wasn’t bad, a few nitpicky grammatical issues (Combine instead of combines, for instance), but really wasn’t that bad. The picture, is just about spot-on too. I think the yellow light at the center is a bit too over-whelming (I know; I’m one to talk about bright, blinding lights, but still) nevertheless it seems alright.

I’m not too sure what to think of Paxton Nally’s pose. I know what your were trying to convey, but I’m undecided as to whether it was done well, or looks too… attempted. If you know what I mean.

It’s kinda hard to tell but it’s a first person picture. :v:
Which guy are you talking about?

See, I just noticed it was first-person. :confused:

I thought the guy to the right with the rifle was Paxton Nally, and that is the person I am referring to.

Oh, alright then. :v:

Nice weenurs.

weenurs.

:buddy:

Damn son, this is good shit.

Pretty nice.