"Outcasts Will" The comic!

This is something like an alpha test.


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I’d like to hear some critique, because obviously this is not too good.
I’d also like to continue this comic and my idea is that by continuing it and getting critique, I’ll get better (At least I’ll try) and so will the comic which will lead to more fun stuff!

Hard to get an impression. It is very short and you mostly repeat the dialog in 3 panels.
It depends where this goes. Will need more to make a judgment.