What is it?
This is a story/description of a world that could be used as a backstory for a roleplaying server. (The name sucked, ass, so I removed it ) I have planned it for a few days now. It isn’t used anywhere, but if there is any interest in it, I might consider making a server (When [thread=770199]my RP script[/thread] works ) Feel free to suggest something, criticize the story or just tell me I’m a moron and should kill myself. ( )
Read on, if you are interested. Please, don’t post responses containing only tl;dr.
The story is currently placed in an (currently) unnamed city, supposedly somewhat hi-tech, that is surrounded by water. (Thus, it must be positioned above a large lake or on sea surface, or maybe it has multiple lakes around it?) The city is new, and there are not people living there, effectively making the players citizens moving in from other areas.
The people living in the city are humans and possibly other humanoids. (Not too different from humans, however!) All citizens are pretty new to the city, the oldest inhabitants may have lived here for a couple of years. maybe three, and there’s constantly new people moving in, new companies being founded and new tings happening most of the time.
Architecture and layout
The buildings are mostly sized small to medium, and built from concrete, though some buildings were build with a more ‘classic theme’ in minds, and are built from bricks and possibly wood. There are some mostly metallic buildings, too, but not many. These should mostly be around the central. The city has nearly no skyscrapers except for the Pillar, located approximately in the middle of the city. The area of the city is divided in sectors, numbered from 0 to 5.
(Possible landmarks being added as they are planned / suggested)
Sector 0 - The central of the city, and the Pillar. Houses the highest class citizens, since the leaders of the city live in the pillar.
Sector 1 - The northeastern area around the city center. Sectors 0 to 4 make up the area where most citizens live.
Sector 2 - The southeastern area.
Sector 3 - The southwestern area.
Sector 4 - The northwestern area.
Sector 5 - The rest of the city area, around the sectors 1 - 5. This area contains mostly empty plains, forests and whatever. (Possibly the only natural part of the city, if it is built on the sea surface or on top of a lake… Most likely would have land transported from other parts of the world to have grass and plants grow?)
Again, I ask you to comment on this work of mine. Suggest additions, replacements and removals for anything in there, and I’ll take a look at it. Also, remember, the story and whatever is incomplete and reasonably short, and my intention is to find out if anyone would be interested in roleplaying in an environment like this.