One of my First poses so give me some constructive criticism
I can barely see the guy
Agreed, some lighting corrections (lamps I suppose) to illuminate the subject a little more would help.
Since this is your first it’s not expected that you photoshit the shop out of it but learning to do your own blood is much better than the blood decals in game. Also some colour adjustments (the puke green look doesn’t seem to work for me) would add to the atmosphere, look for inspiration around this section.
You’ve clearly put some time and thought into the posing of this so for a first I’d say it’s a step in the right direction, keep at it.
Thank you for the feed back :D, I will use what you have told me for my next poses :3