the blood-roses thing is really cool but i think it would work a lot better as a profile character shot, like maybe he’s leaning against something and the poppies are growing out of him. with the bird’s eye perspective it doesn’t really have a whole lot of depth, which makes it harder to tell that they’re flowers.
I’ve been practicing for a while since I feel like my stuff is pretty garbage lately. I made these poses on Construct’s black room to practice and see if I can come up with good poses for a scenebuild that I’m currently working on (I’ll post some images later of it later). Any feedback/thoughts/tips about these generic instances?
Get like 20 pedestrians on each sidewalk. Add sky/clouds. Get tank more to the center where the white door is? More troops marching with tanks? Add a lamp for sun coming from top left, creating shade on the left building walls?
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Sorry, missed the other picture below. You did a great job on the follow-ups.
Needs more dirt. Seriously, muss up those roads with some oil patches or bits of dirt or discolored patches. I don’t think the dutch go out and pressure wash their cobbles everyday. Other than that what Docta Ubafest said. Trash, paper, propaganda posters. Lookin good!