Pyro Pioneer!

AND HIS SIDEKICK! SCOTT

I think in first pic you kind of overdid the red coloring, i would desaturate it a bit

It’s brown, and very empty.

And his gun is smoking like it just caught fire or something.

Pyroneer*

The muzzleflash is aptly named muzzleflash because it is a FLASH that happens when the gun is fired, not after it’s kicked back.

Yes, because smoke is a muzzleflash.

I think the fact that is looks like a muzzleflash is where you slipped up. :colbert:

I think the fact it looks pretty bad is where he slipped up.
It’s a flaming barrel. Why does he have a flaming barrel?
It is boring.
It is lame.

Make it less so.

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