Rabbid Invasion

Garry's Mod general
#1

Part 1: I know it’s a bit bad but I was in a rush. Part 2 will be better.

http://filesmelt.com/dl/logo16.png

http://filesmelt.com/dl/part11.jpg

#2

So it begins!

#3

Bwoh?..DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

http://ds.gamersmafia.com/storage/news/963/rabbid_2bwith_2btf2_2bflamethrower.png

Those rabbids look perfect on TF2 maps…just sayin…

#4

Dialog reads left to right, top to bottom. It was a bit confusing because you didn’t follow that template. I would also suggest different speech bubbles, these look a bit sloppy. One last thing, that red font is nearly illegible.