Part 1: I know it’s a bit bad but I was in a rush. Part 2 will be better.
So it begins!
Those rabbids look perfect on TF2 maps…just sayin…
Dialog reads left to right, top to bottom. It was a bit confusing because you didn’t follow that template. I would also suggest different speech bubbles, these look a bit sloppy. One last thing, that red font is nearly illegible.