Rebel faces assassin on top of a train

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C&C?

I cant see anything. It might be my monitor, but its all black besides a blue glowing thing on the top right

Yup its your monitor, Theres a rebel in a cowering position with an assasin with a lightsaber(?) in his hand… On a trains roof… While its raining and dark… Great and dramatic.

Good posing, lighting, editing, and it’s not quite too dark, although it could still be a bit lighter and still look clearly dark.

Good job.

All posing is good, but try to put in some motion blur so it looks like the train is moving.

Backround needs more detail and to be motion blurred.

“That’s impossible! My father is in City 17!!!”
“…”