Refugee's stopped by Occupation forces

Played Homefront a little,and made this:

I know there are some issues,but overall it’s good,right?

Pretty horrible shading that looks blurry and makes the characters look pasted on to the background.
The way the dead people are holding hands (sort of) looks cheesy.
Really weirdly bright gas can that almost looks like pasted-on pixel art.
Blood is too bright/too pink.

Overall the picture is kinda blurry and the composition is pretty arbitrary.

The posing is decent enough though.

that blood looks way to bright my sir.
make it darker

Blood and shots to heads look rather silly.